Poster for MAR, written by Alexander Will Carter McDonald, AFIN 2024

Short Screenplay AFIN 236

MAR

Written by Alexander Will Carter McDonald

AFIN 2024 Nominee

  • 2024
  • Canada
  • English
  • MA15+
  • Sci-fi
  • Action
  • Romance
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Synopsis

After a secret government experiment escapes, his creator does everything in his power to trap and remove him, all while the experiment plots his revenge.

Writer's Statement

A four year long journey that started as a challenge. MAR came into existence after I was prompted the question, "What would other countries Captain America look like." I wrote a vomit draft for the Pilot in 9 days, submitted it to a competition where I placed 16th. Only writing up new drafts based on feedback from judges and my film school instructors. 9 competitions and 5 drafts later it's only getting better.

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An original and clever adventure whose thrills come through on the page, this screenplay builds its world with real confidence. The panel found the central characters distinctive and engaging, drawn with clear motivations and relationships that give the landscapes they move through genuine weight. It reads with momentum, and the story left them wanting more of it.

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MAR was an official Nominee for Best Short Screenplay at the AFIN International Film Festival 2024, a Top 100 Best Reviewed and IMDb-qualifying festival.

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